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You’ve got a sharp eye for detail and a real knack for setting a scene. The world you’ve created is both believable and layered. You're taking a risk here, and it looks like it's paying off.

The tension between internal and external is well embodied by your narrator, and I appreciate how you use subtlety to bring the world closer to us. You’ve checked the big box for the reader: What happens next?

Keep trusting your voice. It looks like you’re gaining visibility, and deservedly so. Thank you for bringing me into your world, Will.

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