You’ve got a sharp eye for detail and a real knack for setting a scene. The world you’ve created is both believable and layered. You're taking a risk here, and it looks like it's paying off.
The tension between internal and external is well embodied by your narrator, and I appreciate how you use subtlety to bring the world closer to us. You’ve checked the big box for the reader: What happens next?
Keep trusting your voice. It looks like you’re gaining visibility, and deservedly so. Thank you for bringing me into your world, Will.
Wow, thanks Mark, thats great to know and your insight is really appreciated!! Its been a fun world to create (with a whole story in itself), but its been even better to share it.
You’ve got a sharp eye for detail and a real knack for setting a scene. The world you’ve created is both believable and layered. You're taking a risk here, and it looks like it's paying off.
The tension between internal and external is well embodied by your narrator, and I appreciate how you use subtlety to bring the world closer to us. You’ve checked the big box for the reader: What happens next?
Keep trusting your voice. It looks like you’re gaining visibility, and deservedly so. Thank you for bringing me into your world, Will.
Wow, thanks Mark, thats great to know and your insight is really appreciated!! Its been a fun world to create (with a whole story in itself), but its been even better to share it.